Barry Bonds-Jonah

Here’s the pitch. Full count. Here in the ninth with the best baseball player. Barry Bonds, designated hitter, could win them the game, big time. Here’s the pitch on the side . . . but no, crack! A broken bat and out to left-center. But no, he’s too strong for that. Out of the park with a grand slam! That’s nine points for the Giants. Let’s see what the camera outside of Giants’ Stadium is capturing.


Zooming out. . . Oh, but what’s this? Looks like someone in a canoe has got the ball from that amazing grand slam by Barry Bonds. He is paddling to shore and puts his canoe on top of his car. And way back at the stadium the A’s congratulate the Giants for the magnificent game they just experienced.


I am Barry Bonds and this is my house. I just came back from the game and I feel guilty about steroids like usual after every game I win. It feels good to win, but not when you’ve cheated. It feels terrible. Anyway, I won.


Breaking news: the jury decides that Barry Bonds, reported for use of steroids, is going to jail for this use. Terrifying, but only for 9 months. Lots of proof is proven by the prosecutor and it was a close case until the prosecutor showed the judge his proof.


I am Jonah Koppelman. I watch baseball, and I think Barry Bond is a good baseball player even though he took steroids. He still had the biggest record of baseball history. He had 755 home runs. He is strong as a dinosaur (probably because he took steroids). He has lots of confidence and never gives up. He’s a good example for trying your hardest, doing something you like, and practice makes perfect.


Draft:

I like how Barry Bond's is a good baseball player even though he took steroids. He still had the biggest record of baseball history. He had 762 home runs.

The qualities in him are he is strong as a dinosaur even though he took steroids. He has lots of confidence and never gives up tries your hardest do something you like not what you don't like practice makes perfect if you like it do it and yet the best baseball player in baseball history.

I liked when he hit the ball out of the park like a golf ball flying up and up. A canoe was waiting to catch a ball suddenly a roar of applause starts and suddenly a ball coming right at him and he pops out his glove from the canoe ready to catch it and he caught it.