Draft: Brave Pig = Bully Away -Leah

Once there was a pig, he was as
pink as a sunset. He was a very lonely
pig. He had only one friend. The friend
was very sick. The pig cried everyday
like rain falling.

In school everybody
teased him because he was small and
thin. The other pigs were big and fat
like big round balls.
All the pigs wanted to be big and fat.

One day a new
pig joined the class. She was a big
bully. She thought she was the best.
She always called out and punched pigs.

One day the small and thin
pig was out playing by himself as
usual and when the bully
wasn't looking he bit her. She
was running around with a red tail,
she looked like she was on fire.

And from then on the teased pig
was their hero. All the teasing
stopped. The next day the bully
sat on a stinging nettle while all
the pigs were laughing. The "hero" pig
said to the bully, Simon says, "Go west."
She thought that she was so smart that
she went west.* That was the end of
the big bully. From that day on
the little teased pig was their hero.

*Or maybe this is how it ended . . .
The bully went home (which was
west) she sat in her room thinking
about how much she deserved
being hurt. The next day she came
to school. She acted like a new pig person
and from that day on there were no
bullies that bothered the pigs.